New Year, New Life (Original)

New Year, New Life

All night counting down

Having contractions in between.  <any reason why all new lines begin w/ cap. letters?  <it doesn't have to be this way

Terrified, Frightened, and cold

Not knowing what to expect.   <1st four lines: good use of framents

When I feel and hear the pop I know my water has broken

Panic fills my body.   as I began to tremble nervously.

My heart skips a beat   <avoid cliches<cliches are not original and your poetry should always be original

For I know it is now time.

No turning back.

Here comes my greatest accomplishment

My baby boy.

What an amazing Happy New Year!!!  <your title already does a good job of informing readers it's New Years so you don't need to repeat it<